orphan profile

this is a story that i wrote along time ago. Tell me what you think of it. :)

There was a girl named Megan Tutt and she’s from Fairview, Pennsylvania. Megan had to be on the orphan train because Megan’s mom could not get her enough food and clothes for her. Her mom can’t pay for her. Megan knew why she had to go but she did not want to go.
When she got on the train, she was made fun of because of her clothes. They were dirty and not in good shape. People called her dirty Megan. Megan did not care because all she could think about is what her mom said “I will come back for you some day I promise” she said. Megan knew that she would some day.
When she got to the first town she was the first one to get picked. She was 11and had 2 brothers and she would resell and she was strong so a guy picked she because was strong and she could do the work on the farm. Megan did not want to have some one tell her to do work that she did not want to do so she did the opposite of what he told her. He sent her back to the orphan train and she got picked again first and this time it was a couple. Megan though that they look ok for a family. They talked all the way to their house and the house was big and nice. They liked Megan for who she was not like that man did. Megan was at the Brower’s house for a year. Then one day Megan had a visitor and it was her mom and she was there to take her home with her. Megan was so happy but sad that she was leaving the Brower’s house. She went home and was never send back to the orphan train again.